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Description

Small documentation cleanup pass addressing four issues found during review:

  • Replaced acme.com (a real, registered domain) with example.com (IANA-reserved, RFC 2606) in registry and telemetry policy examples.
  • Removed a stale note in the client configuration guide about auto-discovery mode removal in v0.1.0, which shipped over a year and 40 releases ago.
  • Trimmed a :::info[Changed in v0.40.0] admonition in the network isolation guide that duplicated the behavior table above it, and reworded a sentence that leaked version framing into body prose.
  • Rewrote front matter descriptions on three integrations pages (Vault, AWS STS, ngrok ingress) to drop "Learn how to" / "A guide to" filler openers that crowded out the DocCard preview text.

Each fix is its own commit for easy review.

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  • Bug fix (typo, broken link, etc.)

Related issues/PRs

Fixes #1070
Fixes #1071
Fixes #1072
Fixes #1073

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danbarr added 4 commits July 30, 2026 15:21
acme.com is a real, registered domain. example.com is reserved by
IANA (RFC 2606) so it never resolves, making it the correct choice
for documentation examples.

Fixes #1070
The note described one-time migration behavior for users upgrading
across the v0.1.0 boundary, which shipped over a year and 40
releases ago. The remaining guidance is already covered by the
surrounding page content.

Fixes #1071
The admonition mostly duplicated the behavior table directly above
it, and the old behavior it described was a bug (silently broken
DNS for host-networked workloads), so the audience relying on
previous behavior is near zero. Also reword body prose that leaked
version framing into a plain statement of current behavior.

Fixes #1072
The front matter descriptions started with 'Learn how to' or 'A
guide to,' crowding out the useful summary in the first ~70
characters used for the DocCard preview. Lead with the action or
topic instead.

Fixes #1073
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Pull request overview

Documentation cleanup pass across ToolHive CLI, integrations, and Enterprise Manager policy docs to remove stale/version-framed guidance and to make examples/descriptions safer and more scannable (especially in DocCard previews).

Changes:

  • Replaced acme.com with RFC 2606 example.com URLs in registry and telemetry policy examples.
  • Removed stale/duplicative version-callout content in CLI guides (auto-discovery removal note; v0.40.0 network isolation admonition).
  • Rewrote three integrations front matter descriptions to drop filler openers and lead with the action/topic.

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docs/toolhive/integrations/vault.mdx Front matter description rewritten to remove “Learn how to” filler and front-load the summary.
docs/toolhive/integrations/ingress-ngrok.mdx Front matter description rewritten to remove “A guide to” filler and improve DocCard preview usefulness.
docs/toolhive/integrations/aws-sts.mdx Front matter description rewritten to remove “Learn how to” filler and lead with the action.
docs/toolhive/guides-cli/network-isolation.mdx Removed version-framing sentence and trimmed redundant “Changed in v0.40.0” admonition that duplicated the behavior table.
docs/toolhive/guides-cli/client-configuration.mdx Removed stale note about auto-discovery removal in v0.1.0.
docs/platform/enterprise-manager/policies/telemetry.mdx Updated example OTLP endpoints from *.acme.com to *.example.com.
docs/platform/enterprise-manager/policies/registry.mdx Updated example registry endpoints from *.acme.com to *.example.com.

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danbarr merged commit e4a8e59 into main Jul 30, 2026
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